Jus whether you think its any good...not meant to be a work of art, but I really like it. It's by my boyfriend, done in 2005. Don't worry he didn't do the things in the poem!! Thanks for opinions
saturday night special.
I wanna get high so gimme ur acid, pills and shrooms!,
Gimme a night with a ur bird and a room with a view.
Gimme a can full of bull and bottle full of V!,
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Gimme a drug induced coma, from a night of coke and speed.
Alls goin well! wot a ******* night! there's love in this room no chance of any fights.
"ra ra ra drink alls round!, lovely day at the races won my self a cool hard grand!
dealers happy too, nearly bought all his stash.
all upfront, all legit, all wrapped up, all cash,
"Back to the bar, another round on urs truely!
But the boys and me are getting some stares from that mob who were unruley.
,kicking off with their mate the barman, u know, that mob from last week
"stop ******* about dan! go home and get some ******* sleep!
He should of heeded last weeks word our, friend with the stare!
his eyes are locked on me now.he's not ruining my night! smarmy ****,like i care.
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Jul 30, 2008 Do you want her to have to give up her cherished career so that you two could be together? I think that if you were really in love with her,
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lets have A nice little cocktail, a nice little mix!
a nice little headrush, a nice little kick!
a nice little puch to that **** who acted up,
my eyes have started blotting, "keep staring at me mate? now ur ******!
i didn't see that copper,i swear he wasn't there.........
that last Drinks kicked in, now "i'm" ******...But do i care?.
i'll get a Trunchen to the head, and some cuffs to the wrists.
No way i'll pass breath test, Equaly ****** if he wants my piss
"just try and stand perfectly still, don't **** this up!"
"just one more mark on my name, then i'm behind bars, and i'm stuck"
so wot do i do? do i stand? do i run?
there's a sudden air of tension, "i'm not getting done".
its fight or flight mode now, one choice for this saturday son,
i need to fly this coop now, i'm no ******* chicken! but i'm smart so i'll run.....
Chasing me down past cars, lamps and trees
past the towered office blocks, floods of light and tarmac seas
"**** he's catching up, Gotta move quick Snap"
"i need to boot it to second gear,
like i'm running on the track".
now i'm running with a passion, i'm running with a cause.
now i'm running from the judges, i'm running from the laws.
i'm running from a crime and the pennies just dropped,
is this copper's chasing me, coz flash ***** heart's stopped?
i remember it now....that smarmy grin,that evil stare,
i threw the first punch...it landed...he dropped out the air.
face hit the floor with a blood curdling crack.....
"keep ******* running son! theres no turning back!"
"**** that branch came close, i'm lucky that i ducked!"
"if this blue ctaches u now ur well and truely ******!"
"cuffs around the wrists and cuffs around the feet"
so i keep on running... "if i can hide... i'll be sweet"
i look back expecting the worst...no copper, no squad cars,
no punch ups no hurst?
"i couldn't of lost him with ease that **** was on my back!
"i was running for my life this **** was just running the saturday night track"
So wot do i do now? second choice of the night...
do run some more and hide....or do i do wots right?
do i turn back? make my case, talk it out?
or do i just forget it all, act like a ******* lout?
some of this can be used in another world.
You could write for Hollywood. This would make a nice movie.
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What do you think of this poem, please?