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1 post - 1 author - Last post: 11 hours agoHi everyone, I opened up a blog site a couple of weeks ago thinking that it was a great idea. Now.I'm not so sure! I thought some of you guys might.
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Time: November 14th, 1532. Pizarro's ships have just been sighted off the coastal desert of Peru, by a Khipu messenger. (Inca runner of messages, in knotted form)
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This is a prose/poem. First draft only. It is long.
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Eagle of the Sun
For kings and gods will always be,
Legends of reality.
Merciful Inti! Sun! Tapa Father! Hear this man! Sign...one sign.
Condor, help me reach the Sun!
He knelt. Sand puffs seeing sails, as he. Not fishing sails.
Why men, then?
Tapa Father blinked. Sun-harsh. Earth lurched. Shook.
Dunes walked.
Ear to sand...deep groaning. Warning! Mama Pacha
Shaking Puma's Land this day.
Feet, sand blistered. Seared. He knelt...knees and hands.
Mama Pacha tossed crests. Boats rode up, then down. Closer
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To his land's shore.
A mouth opened below...snake scales...Uca Pacha!
The Evil world joined all, today. This Time.
Sun. Earth. Hell...Inti. Mama Pacha. Uca Pacha.
Convergence of destruction.
For kings and gods will always be,
Legends of reality.
Blooded fingers tied colored knots. Message to Atahualpa.
Alpaca fine cords. Haste! Men walking the shoreline!
Inti glinted metal from these mens' hearts. Not gold. Silver.
No feather cloaks.
Khipu message around his throat. Mama Kuka's leaf between
Lip, gum. Pouch full. Condor! Give me wings!
Your mind is one of the greatest computers ever. Well done E!
I've watched this several times. Best flick I've seen in awhile. I'm already looking forward to the release of the special-edition, extended version.
My favorite line was definitely
"Sun. Earth. Hell...Inti. Mama Pacha. Uca Pacha." That blows me away it's so much fun to say.
I just got one question; I get a little confused there in the Star Keeper stanza. Does Illapa take the CORD from the runner and throw them into the sky, or is he transforming the RUNNER into an eagle? Or is the runner delusional, and is only seeing his futile attempt play out in a dream? I took it as the latter.
So, I am left wondering . . . in a good way.
All good movies have to have a killer ending no matter how good the rest of the movie was, the last three stanzas of this movie: "KILLER".
For kings and gods
(and your poetry)
will always be,
legends of reality.
I wasn't going to read anything after 10, but this lured me int.
When i was in Dakota i used to sit or lay and watch those eagles floating and hanging lazily on the thermals. people would say " what are you doing that for?" then when i told them they would reply "oh! they are only the eagles". We never see them in the south, and in Scotland where they are it is a very rare sight.
So much in life is taken for granted.
Well done.
Equivalent of Cortez, the Killer, by Neil Young.
And "The Inheritors" by William Golding.
OK, so I'm not college educated, and I don't read much. But I like it, yes I do.
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I usually need a jolt of energy to start reading one of your history legend poems. Since the turkey is not done, I am going on reserve! lol Fascinating tale interwoven with historic references and lore. Google became the default to catch up to you. I especially liked the timely insertion of "for kings and gods...reality." You have a skill for this type of poem. Compliments.
I saw this in a dream...
...I think.....
or it could have been a premonition.
Breathtaking. Read as though entranced. Was it long? I didn't notice, being lost in your tale. You made it breath!
Breath taking
Even though it was a wee bit long,I couldn't stop reading it! Because You write so well! You My DEAR LADY,could post a novel on here,and I would read it to the end!! VERY,very great write!!
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Really nice job putting this together Excellent!!!
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