Check out my song I wrote. I think the lyrics is kinda rusty. Anyway, this is about when someone is about to do a suicide attempt. I hope this help.
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Beginning of your life is like sunshine
Thinking life will follow your order
Until someone rejected you
These world blow the light of you
{chorus}
The pain, the pain
Can’t stand it anymore
And soon fall
But hold
This not over
Tears running from your eyes
Want to talk to somebody
But afraid they don’t understand you
Your emotional feelings blocking the sunlight
Changing who not to be
{chorus}
Trying to remove the dragger
Still it sting
Tired of being in sorrow
Finding a way to end it
Can’t solve your problem
Instead you decided to take an easy way
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Standing near the edge
Ready to fall
Wondering is it the solution
{Chorus}
Closing your eye and
Prepare to leave
Till you see a bright light leading to another path
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What path you’re taking then?
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*tear tear* that was so good
For me it would depend on the tpye of tune your going to put with this. I'm thinking of a tune like "Never Too Late" from 3 Days Grace. Or a gutair.
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i like it a lot!! ur very talented!! i wish i could hear u sing it. im sure its great
you know theres a certain time in evryones life when one feels like contemplating suicide...... it is just the way a person feels at times of confusion when every door seems shut....... the only thing i didnt like is the ending....... if you can change it a bit....... if you do that do send i to me on:
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you can change the last verse to:
dont close your eyes yet
dont prepare to leave
wait till you see a bright light leading you to another path
chorus
so what path are you taking then?
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not too bad...
thats pretty good :)
I'm impressed with the lyrics. All it needs now is some polishing and a good melody.
That would be good in poem form too...
thats amazing..your really talented! i dont think they need improving cause everything you said had meaning. you have great potential...i hope if this ever becomes famous then your the one singing it cause then it would mean even more.
i think i heard that somewhere before are you sure you wrote it
I'm usually a happy song person, but if it had a really good tune, I'd buy it off itunes. :)
sounds interesting. but remember 4 quality songs the tune usually is made before the lyrics.... got a sound already???? ;3
very good
thats sounds awesome, how does the tune go?? you better watch no one steals the lyrics from you on here.
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I take it English is your second language. If so, THAT'S the only reason it's so rusty. Just improve on that and then you'd get a 7.5/10
**** that is good" "health and long life to you"" good song keep them coming "because if you die they die with you!!
dats hot! =) are u beginner or something??? cuz that was pretty darn good... keep writing!
i like it
i thought it was wierd cuz it didnt rhyme at first but it didnt ruin the song at all it was awesome. here is a song i wrote also if anyone wants to see it
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lovely!!
thats pretty good!!
i wish i can hear the tune...its ok i guess..
Dude you have talent.....it so personal and profound keep it up
that is really good
that was deep! wow how long did it take for u to write that? its great and i want to hear the song! keep writing, it might become a proffesion lol! :)
its okay...
awesome! u should add more lyrics to it...i wanna read more!
Emo much?
Its Beautiful
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someone might snatch it
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