At morning's peak
when the sun has risen
and the clouds have set in motion,
I wake to see
your beautiful eyes,
so blue, like the ocean.
I sit and stare,
my heartbeat steady,
while your eyes lock into mine,
at the touch of our lips,
comfort ensues
I know everything will be just fine.
As the rain falls
from open blue skies,
God's rainbow shines above,
so rich in colors
all mixed together
and beautiful, just like our love.
As darkness sets in
over the sun,
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the day slowly comes to a close,
I'm grateful for you,
being here in my life,
my sweet, beautiful red rose.
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This is pretty.
The poetry nerd in me has to say something bluntly. Sun, Clouds, Ocean, Rain, Sky -- these are all "big image" words that should be used sparingly (if at all) in poetry. Those are images that sort of write a poem without any help from the writer.
But if this is a poem you wrote for one specific person, then rock and roll.
 My Poem, "In Love With You".......Your thoughts?
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My poem "In Love With You" by DJB, What do you think??