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| Is this poem just too hot? | | Published by: anonym 2010-03-18 |
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My heart is charcoal, my soul is cast in a fire
Watching the world burn is my only desire
I barbeque people live just for the smell
There's not enough fire on Earth so I'll see you in hell
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At night I dream of explosions and have a wet dream
I get so hot that my sweat turns to steam
I watch a burning building and it gives me wood
I set my eyebrows on fire, damn it feels good
It all started with matches and gasoline
Blew up a couple churches and got away clean
I upped my game with lighters and tourches
I bought blackmarket flamethrowers that cost me a fourtune
Now I dont need anything, starting fires with my mind
I look at you and smoke you like kine
Every night to me is like the Fourth of July
It's my favorite holiday, wonder why?
I drink gasoline and piss out the smoke
Cremation is bondage to me, no joke
I take the girlys home and give them hot flashes
Later on I got them swallowing my ashes
I burn entire cities with my eyes
and spit lava at anybody I despise
I hunt fire fighters and set them a-blaze
Cause the piss me off in a hundred different ways
Before there hose can hit the water turns to vapor
Then I light em up like they're paper
I'm so hot no body could handle
The sun can't even hold a candle
Look into my eyes and see the inferno
Then you will see that the fire's eternal
What do you think
AMAZING. I, myself am a poet and that poem shows deep down into the heart. This poem has real potential and so do you. There are a few spelling errors but I am sure you can fix them. Do the world a favor and keep writing poetry. I find that the best time to write poetry is just in the morning or before you go to bed or when you feel sad or angry or miserable. Also if you can't find a word to rhyme with another word then just search for a rhyming dictionary. Hope I helped and please keep writing poetry!!!!
Dude that was just kick ***. now I gotta be that. thanks man now you just gave me a great idea.
The Midwest Arsonist
That was awesome!
I really liked it =D
interesting words used in your lyrics, deep anger and self guilt described in this poem with low esteem. should be called .. a cry from within.
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