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| Is this ok you think for a poem,my spelling is very bad so please bare with it? | | Published by: anonym 2008-11-21 |
| | My love for you
is deep and blue as the ocean to the skies
when i think of you i see a rose
a red rose
you are the engine in my life that makes me start
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Eye have a spelling chequer, It came with my Pea Sea, It plainly marques ok please turn it off at least until you speak (a good 20 minutes will be fine)
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everyday
for always and forever
i love cherish you as if i could never feel this way
i feel for you
to the end
i'll spend
every loving
moment with you.
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For just starting out, it's ok. You don't always have to rhyme.
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A poem is energy transferred from where the poet got it (he will have some on a bar napkin last night so they must be very important but I cant for the
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The best advise, let the words just flow out of you onto the paper. You can always go back and spell check after typing it in.
You should never expect anyone to put up with incorrect spelling or grammar. It's unacceptable, and it's the writer's job to put out his or her best work.
The line: "you are the engine in my life that makes me start" isn't poetic at all. It sounds choppy to me. It's like every line is from a different idea. Also, the form is inconsistent. Don't stop the flow of your thoughts. Write everything that pops into your head. Then edit after you have taken out every emotion from your system. It works for me every time.
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