recently i received my graded essay back.
Astronomy and Philosophy : PHI1AAP and PHI2HPSA Subject ::
File Format: PDF/Adobe Acrobat - View as HTMLessay writing or English expression. If your exercises show poor English expression, your tutor may advise you or direct you to see an adviser in the
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and the teacher graded it as a partial. i spent a lot of time on this paper, and was very happy with it. the teacher said it vague, and uncertain. i am frustrated,for i feel like i wrote something good but it was not what the teacher wanted. in effect one can say the content was good but lacked (form) if you can call it that. hmmm...so if anything i would like to understand what teachers are looking for in a thoughtful essay?
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Advise on expression in a essay.?